Friday, April 27, 2012

This Isn`t Fair -Jasmine



Today was the day
I wanted to run away from this village
The idea of this lottery was madness
Who would think of such an idea?
I couldn’t stand that our whole life we lived in fear
Why is life so cruel?
I wanted to shout “No” as soon as I heard my name
Tessie
Who would have guessed that my death would be caused by stones on this very day?
“It isn`t fair”

2 comments:

  1. i liked how it's from the viewpoint of Tessie, just remember to edit any typos, but still really good

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  2. It was really good and very well written. A little bit of grammar mistakes though. -Rohmee

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