Tuesday, May 1, 2012

Lion King Perspective


Kailene Power
Mrs Smith
Creative writing
May 1, 2012
Scar’s Revenge

My name is scar.
You may have seen me on the big screen.
I don’t mean to seem that way.
You need to understand.
My older brother betrayed me.
He thinks it’s okay.
He took my Sarabi.
I don’t mean to brag,
But I’m better looking.
She changed her mind so fast.
He didn’t bother refusing.
I just want revenge.
He gets what he wants.
I want this to be the end.
I want what I want.
He never said sorry.
He never says hi.
I want my big brother.
Instead of turning him into hide
So before you judge,
Before you insist,
Think of what happened,
That made me like this.
Look in my eyes.
I don’t mean to be angry.
I want to apologize.
I just miss my Sarabi.


3 comments:

  1. this is really cute, I like the rhymes. -Breanne

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  2. I like this a lot & I like how the sentences are short it adds more meaning - Courtney

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  3. I really like the rhymes and I think it`s short and simple. -Jasmine

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