Kailene Power
Mrs Smith
Creative writing
May 1, 2012
Scar’s
Revenge
My name
is scar.
You may
have seen me on the big screen.
I don’t
mean to seem that way.
You need
to understand.
My older
brother betrayed me.
He thinks
it’s okay.
He took
my Sarabi.
I don’t
mean to brag,
But I’m
better looking.
She changed
her mind so fast.
He didn’t
bother refusing.
I just
want revenge.
He gets
what he wants.
I want
this to be the end.
I want
what I want.
He never
said sorry.
He never
says hi.
I want
my big brother.
Instead
of turning him into hide
So
before you judge,
Before
you insist,
Think
of what happened,
That
made me like this.
Look
in my eyes.
I don’t
mean to be angry.
I want
to apologize.
I just
miss my Sarabi.
this is really cute, I like the rhymes. -Breanne
ReplyDeleteI like this a lot & I like how the sentences are short it adds more meaning - Courtney
ReplyDeleteI really like the rhymes and I think it`s short and simple. -Jasmine
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