Tuesday, May 15, 2012

This is horrible but oh well..


Kailene Power
Mrs. Smith
Creative Writing
May 9, 2012
BebeFinders 1.0

BebeFinders 1.0! Help me find my baby! That’s how you call the squad of 6 people that find children under the age of 14. Run a ways, kidnapped kids, and even babies that may have wandered off while you took your eyes off the for “one second”. BebeFinders will find them. They have special candy that attracts kids and super duper bebe detectors that find kids up to 500 miles away. There has never been a cold case for them and they plan to never have one.
One day a babysitter names Jamie was at the park with Maddie, a girl she was watching. Maddie, aged four, was playing in the little playhouse on top of the slide. 
Jamie spotted a friend of hers and walked over to say "Hey". They started to talk and about five minutes later- Maddie was gone.
Maddie's parents would be coming to get her shortly and Maddie was no where to be found. Jamie and her friend looked all over but no sign of her was seen. 
walking abck to the park, Brit, Jamie's friend, spotted a flyer:
                           BEBEFINDERS 1.0
                           Lose Your Kid?
                           We'll Find Him/Her!
                           All You Have To Say Is:
                           "BebeFinders 1.0 help
                            me find my baby!"
Jamie said it and three minutes later, 6 people with a bunch of gear showed up. They took off right away and within ten minutes they were back with Maddie in the eldest woman's arms. Maddie thought it would be funny to play hide and seek but not tell Jamie the game was on and to try and find her. Obviously, Maddie won.
Soon after, Maddie's parents showed up and they had no clue. Jamie got paid, hugged Maddie, promised she would babysit again, and that was the end of the day- for Jamie at least...
The End.

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