Monday, January 23, 2012

Four Truths and Four Lies

I am Breanne.

I am fifteen years old.
My family always eats at the dinner table together.
When I was eight I had my adenoids removed.
I want to be a social worker.
My father owns a restaurant.
I've never been on an airplane.
My mother was in a severe car accident while seven months pregnant with me.
All my grandparents are alive.

I am Breanne.

3 comments:

  1. I think this is really good, and it's hard to tell which one are the truths and which ones are the lies.
    One thing I think you could do to improve this is to maybe add more detail to each statement you made just so it's more descriptive.

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  2. My brother had his adenoids removed when I was little. I thought he had his " annoys" removed.... and so I wondered why he was still annoying.
    - Ms. Gizzarelli

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