Tuesday, January 24, 2012

Time

By Breanne

5 comments:

  1. Poem is really good, just the ending could have been different

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  2. i really like this it tells a story, but ending was a little abrupt

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  3. i really like this it tells a story, but ending was a little abrupt

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  4. I really liked this but you could have used more words, but otherwise it was good. -Courtney

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  5. it is good but it doesn't have much of a story or meaning, but it is well put together. -Rohmee Mathe

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