First drafts of creative writing exercises from the students of Elizabeth Seton Academy in Dorchester, MA.
I like the mood in this poem, but even though it was hard I think it you should have said more at the end, what did she want? -Breanne
The poem is really good, but maybe you could have had more words to help understand the end -Haleigh
love this and the feelings strong, just get confused for the ending
This is good but I agree the ending is confusing. What do you mean what did she want? -Courtney
I like the mood in this poem, but even though it was hard I think it you should have said more at the end, what did she want? -Breanne
ReplyDeleteThe poem is really good, but maybe you could have had more words to help understand the end -Haleigh
ReplyDeletelove this and the feelings strong, just get confused for the ending
ReplyDeleteThis is good but I agree the ending is confusing. What do you mean what did she want? -Courtney
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