You wake up every morning waiting for your answer, but it still just never made itself clear to Jessica. Maybe something like this didn't have an answer right away. Maybe it's just something you figure out as you go along. Jessica probably had the worst luck with guys. Ever since she was a teenager guys have left her without reason, made her think she was special, then left her life as soon as they had entered. This time was different, Jessica thought to herself. But, even though she thought it, the words didn't hold much significance to her. Jessica couldn't remember how many times she thought to herself this guy would be different, but he ended up being just like all the rest. In the end she decided she would give him a chance, the chance he deserved with her, and the chance Jessica needed to find a guy who truly wants to be with her. If you never take a chance on someone you'll ever know what you have missed. It's more important to live and learn than never live at all.
-Courtney
This is a good written short story! I really liked reading it and its easy to relate too, the only thing I can think of that you could have done would to have gone into more depth and made it longer. -Caitlin
ReplyDeleteI like the overall idea of this story, it was cute and well written, but you could have made it longer and added more details. -Breanne
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