I am Caitlin.
I am fifteen years old.
My parents are divorced and I live with my mother and my sister.
I don't see my father and I haven't since I was 4.
Me and my mom are really close.
I want nothing more than to dye my hair.
I want to be a vet when I get older.
My favorite color is purple.
I have a yellow lab and her name is Buttercup.
I am Caitlin.
Don't forget to write your name so we know who is commenting. Also, work on being specific because that will be more helpful. How could this flow better?
ReplyDelete- Mrs. Smith
This is good because the lies all sound believable. Some parts could have flowed a little better with a different choice of words. - Breanne
ReplyDeleteI thought this was really good with the way the words flowed, but you could have been more descriptive and used different words to describe certain things. -Courtney
ReplyDeleteI think you have beautiful hair! I don't think you should dye it. Unless you dye it purple... which happens to be my favorite color also!
ReplyDelete-Ms. G